读后续写环境描写专练附两种写景画面
读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Deep in the forest, my husband and I had climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us. It was May, yet we walked up a snow-covered hill. When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees, it did not dampen our spirits. Not once did we say, “let’s turn around.” This was our vacation, and we were on an adventure. Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.
The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometer hike, yet we were already walking a long distance. Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the surroundings, nothing looked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lost in a notional park that did not officially open for another week.
Usually, I am the calm one in the relationship, but my husband surprised me with his calmness. This did not comfort me; In fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband to call for help, but there was no cell-phone signal in this isolated（偏僻的）area.
It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road, and my heavy breathing. My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower. With each step on the road, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.
My vision sharpened. I noticed everything around me: the trees, rocks and snow. I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water. For the first time in my life, I was ready and willing to get a ride, but we did not meet with a single car on the road. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We focused on each other, made joint decisions and connected through gratitude. We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on.
注意：1. 所续写短文词数为 150 左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：
My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.”
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翻译小练习：
1. 我们很快就发现自己正朝着它前进。
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2. 在偏僻的地方找到这样一座大楼，我们充满了希望和兴奋。
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3. 我们摇摇晃晃地爬上山，好像所有的痛苦都消失了似的。
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4. 当我们走近时，一个牌子出现了，上面写着：行政办公室。
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5. 然而，它并没有对外开放。
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6. 空荡荡的大厅使我们一下子紧张起来。我们站在那里绝望地想知道下一步该怎么办。
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7. 我几乎抑制不住自己的热情，脱口而出：“我们迷路了！”
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8. 她安慰我们，给我们开了个房间休息一下。
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9. 看到我们又冷又饿，她用热巧克力招待我们。
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10. 看了地图后，我们发现我们的车停在三公里外。
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11. 她让我们搭便车回去，我们欣然接受了。
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12. 又看到我们租来的车，我松了一口气。有如此难忘的经历真是太幸运了！
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参考答案：
1. 我们很快就发现自己正朝着它前进。
In no time did we find ourselves heading for it.
2. 在偏僻的地方找到这样一座大楼，我们充满了希望和兴奋。
We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building in the middle of nowhere.
3. 我们摇摇晃晃地爬上山，好像所有的痛苦都消失了似的。
We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gone.
4. 当我们走近时，一个牌子出现了，上面写着：行政办公室。
As we approached, a sign came into sight, which read: Administration Office.
5. 然而，它并没有对外开放。
However, it was not open for business.
6. 空荡荡的大厅使我们一下子紧张起来。我们站在那里绝望地想知道下一步该怎么办。
The empty hall made us nervous all at once. We stood there hopelessly wondering what to do next.
7. 我几乎抑制不住自己的热情，脱口而出：“我们迷路了！”
I could barely hold back my enthusiasm and blurted out, “We’re lost!”
8. 她安慰我们，给我们开了个房间休息一下。
She comforted us and opened a room for us to take a break.
9. 看到我们又冷又饿，她用热巧克力招待我们。
Seeing we were cold and hungry, she treated us with hot chocolate.
10. 看了地图后，我们发现我们的车停在三公里外。
After studying the map, we figured out that our car was parked over three kilometers away.
11. 她让我们搭便车回去，我们欣然接受了。
She offered us a ride back to our car and we accepted gladly.
12. 又看到我们租来的车，我松了一口气。有如此难忘的经历真是太幸运了！
I felt relieved to see our rental car again. What a blessing to have such an unforgettable experience!
参考范文：
My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. In no time did we find ourselves heading for it. We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building in the middle of nowhere. We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gone. As we approached, a sign came into sight, which read: Administration Office. However, it was not open for business. The empty hall made us nervous all at once. We stood there hopelessly wondering what to do next.
Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.” I could barely hold back my enthusiasm and blurted out, “We’re lost!” She comforted us and opened a room for us to take a break. Seeing we were cold and hungry, she treated us with hot chocolate. After studying the map, we figured out that our car was parked over three kilometers away. She offered us a ride back to our car and we accepted gladly. I felt relieved to see our rental car again. What a blessing to have such an unforgettable experience!
读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was time to go home. “Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,” Miss Walker called, as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the corner, she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn't want to run after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of her. “I'm going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I've won lots of competitions. But when I'm in a race, I'm not really thinking about winning. I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water...”Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic.
The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. No-body moved. Jenny slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind. “She's stolen my watch!” Lee said angrily,“ It went missing at school yesterday.”
注意：
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.
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Paragraph 2:
At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.
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翻译小练习：
1. 珍妮把手表还给他，看着他，为自己的所作所为感到抱歉，低声说：“不，我没有偷你的‘魔法手表’。我昨天捡到的。但是……”
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2. 沃克斯小姐对珍妮说：“但你打算在演讲结束后把那只“魔法手表”还回去，对吗？
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3. 我相信你会喜欢的。既然你还了表。让我们把注意力集中在你的演讲上吧，勇敢的姑娘。”
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4. 珍妮向她点点头，在心里重复着“我相信你……勇敢的女孩”这几个字。
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5. 珍妮心想：“至少沃克小姐相信我，至少我是个勇敢的女孩。”
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6. 她鼓足勇气站在全班同学面前，带着沃克小姐鼓舞人心的微笑和句子。
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7. 她的话又涌了出来。
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8. 珍妮甚至连“魔法手表”都没有。她逐渐明白，只有信念，才有信心。
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参考答案：
1. 珍妮把手表还给他，看着他，为自己的所作所为感到抱歉，低声说：“不，我没有偷你的‘魔法手表’。我昨天捡到的。但是……”
Jenny returned the watch and looked at him, feeling sorry for what she had done and saying in a low voice, “No, I didn’t steal your “magical watch”. I picked it up yesterday. But…”
2. 沃克小姐对珍妮笑了笑，接着说：“但是你打算在演讲结束后还回那只“魔法手表”，对吧？
Miss Walker smiled to Jenny and continued, “But you intend to return the “magical watch” after your speech, right?
3. 我相信你会喜欢的。既然你还了表。让我们把注意力集中在你的演讲上吧，勇敢的姑娘。”
I believe you would do like that. Now, since you’ve returned the watch. Let’s concentrate on your speech, brave girl.”
4. 珍妮向她点点头，在心里重复着“我相信你……勇敢的女孩”这几个字。
Jenny nodded to her and repeated those words “I believe you…brave girl” in her heart.
5. 珍妮心想：“至少沃克小姐相信我，至少我是个勇敢的女孩。”
Jenny thought to herself: “at least Miss Walker believes me, at least I am a brave girl.”
6. 她鼓足勇气站在全班同学面前，带着沃克小姐鼓舞人心的微笑和句子。
She collected all her courage to stand in front of the whole class and with Miss Walker’s encouraging smile and sentences.
7. 她的话又涌了出来。
Words flooded out of her again.
8. 珍妮甚至连“魔法手表”都没有。她逐渐明白，只有信念，才有信心。
Jenny made it even without the “magical watch”. She came to know that confidence never goes with anything but belief.
参考范文：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny returned the watch and looked at him, feeling sorry for what she had done and saying in a low voice, “No, I didn’t steal your “magical watch”. I picked it up yesterday. But…” Miss Walker smiled to Jenny and continued, “But you intend to return the “magical watch” after your speech, right? I believe you would do like that. Now, since you’ve returned the watch. Let’s concentrate on your speech, brave girl.” Jenny nodded to her and repeated those words “I believe you…brave girl” in her heart.
At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first. Jenny thought to herself: “at least Miss Walker believes me, at least I am a brave girl.” She collected all her courage to stand in front of the whole class and with Miss Walker’s encouraging smile and sentences. Words flooded out of her again. Jenny made it even without the “magical watch”. She came to know that confidence never goes with anything but belief.
1. 人物动作的画面定格
They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge. 她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。
His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。
Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.
站在空旷的道路旁，他们抬头仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的平和。
2. 特殊寓意的写景画面
The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come. 天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）
Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）
The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）
The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）
The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）
Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud. 抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。 （雨水来临的画面）
Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）