读后续写积累提能练之情感细节描写: 感激与感动（最新版）
读后续写
续写积累提能练（六）
教材语料整合
亮词：
[情感描写] pleasant; energy
[动作描写] harm; wrap; prevent; design; replace
[环境描写] frost; steep; soil; shallow; vapour; beauty; grand; valley; narrow; waterfall; thunder; desert; climate
美句：
1. Imagine mountains wrapped in silver water, shining in the spring sun. Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with growing rice. During autumn, these same mountains are gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost. These are the colors of the Longji Rice Terraces. (景物描写)
2. Reaching as far as the eye can see, these terraces cover tall mountains, often from the bottom to the very top. (景物描写)
拓展语料积累
情感细节描写: 感激与感动
单词：
appreciate vt. 感激→appreciation n. 感激 grateful/thankful adj. 感激的; 感谢的→gratefully/thankfully adv. 感激地→gratitude/thanks n. 感激; 感谢 move/touch vt. 使感动→moving/touching adj. 令人感动的→moved/touched adj. 感动的
词块：
shed tears of gratitude 流下感激的泪水 be moved/touched to tears 感动得落泪 have a deep gratitude towards......对……深怀感激 with gratitude/appreciation 感激地 owe sb a lot/a great deal 非常感激某人 be deeply moved/touched by 被……深深感动
句型：
A warm current welled up/rose in her heart. (无灵主语句) 一股暖流涌上她的心头。
With tears streaming down her face/With tears welling up in her eyes, she thanked him again and again with a lump in her throat. (with复合结构) 她泪流满面/热泪盈眶, 哽咽着一遍又一遍地感谢他。
Deeply moved/touched/affected by what he had done, I felt tears rolling down without control. (过去分词短语作状语) 他的所作所为深深打动了我, 我的眼泪无法控制地滚落下来。
A feeling of warmth sweeping over Peter on the cold day, he began to believe there was kindness in every corner. (独立主格) 寒冷的天气里, 一种温暖的感觉席卷了彼得, 他开始相信每个角落都有善良。
It was because he risked his life to save me that I shed tears of gratitude. (强调句型)
正是因为他冒着生命危险救了我, 我流下了感激的眼泪。
语料运用【遇险获救】
With mountains wrapped in mist, we headed off, enjoying the surrounding beauty, but storms moved in fast, interrupting our pleasant morning trip. The wind picked up and ①______________________________________. My husband stopped fishing to start the motor, but in vain. ②___________________________________ (强调句型) back to the harbor and ③___________________________ (无灵主语句). ④_________________________ (过去分词短语作状语), I thanked him again and again with a lump in my throat, ⑤ __________________ (with的复合结构). My husband held his hand, saying with gratitude, “⑥________________ (含否定词表达最高级含义). ”
群山笼罩在薄雾中, 我们出发了, 欣赏着周围的美景, 但暴风雨来得很快, 打断了我们愉快的早行。起风了, 雷声隆隆。我丈夫停止钓鱼去发动马达, 但没有用。就在那个时候, 一位慷慨的渔夫设法帮助我们回到了港口, 一股暖流涌上我们的心头。他所做的一切深深打动了我, 我一次又一次地感谢他, 喉咙哽咽, 眼泪不由自主地滚落下来。我丈夫握着他的手, 感激地说: “我们再怎么感谢您都不为过。”
【答案解析】
① thunder rumbled
解析：根据上下文“暴风雨来得很快”“起风了”，此处需要描述天气的进一步恶化，“雷声隆隆”符合场景。“thunder rumbled”中，**thunder**（雷声）作主语，**rumbled**（发出隆隆声）为不及物动词，简洁生动地描绘出雷声的状态，与“wind picked up”（起风）形成并列的天气变化描述。
② It was at that moment that a generous fisherman managed to help us
解析：题目要求使用**强调句型**，强调句型的基本结构为“It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who + 其他部分”。此处被强调的是时间状语“at that moment”（就在那时），结合上下文时态（过去时），用“was”；“a generous fisherman”（一位慷慨的渔夫）为主语，“managed to help us”（设法帮助我们）体现出在困境中得到帮助的过程，符合语境逻辑。
③ warmth filled our hearts
解析：要求使用**无灵主语句**，即主语为非人的事物（无生命的名词）。“一股暖流涌上我们的心头”中，“暖流”（warmth）是无灵主语，“filled our hearts”（充满我们的心房）形象地表达了受到帮助后的感动，用无灵主语使句子更具文学性，避免了以“we”作主语的平淡表达。
④ Deeply moved by what he had done
解析：要求用**过去分词短语作状语**，此处表达“他所做的一切深深打动了我”，“moved”（被打动）与逻辑主语“I”是被动关系，用过去分词；“by what he had done”（被他所做的事）说明感动的原因，“deeply”（深深地）加强程度，符合“过去分词短语作原因状语”的语法规则。
⑤ with tears rolling down uncontrollably
解析：要求用**with的复合结构**，其基本形式为“with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语”。此处“tears”（眼泪）是宾语，“rolling down”（滚落）是现在分词作宾语补足语（表主动、进行），“uncontrollably”（不由自主地）修饰“rolling down”，生动描绘出感动时流泪的状态，符合“with复合结构作伴随状语”的用法。
⑥ We can never thank you enough
解析：要求“含否定词表达最高级含义”，“can never...enough”是固定句型，意为“再……也不为过”，通过否定词“never”表达“我们非常感谢您”的最高级含义，符合语境中丈夫感激渔夫的情感，且结构简洁有力。
总结 ：以上填空均严格遵循语法要求（强调句型、无灵主语句等），同时贴合上下文语境，通过精准的词汇和句式，生动展现了从遇暴风雨到受助后感动的过程，使句子逻辑连贯、情感饱满。