微技能之细节描写 ----情绪描写
举例：
如表达一个人的疲累时，可用概括描述：she felt exhausted.
同时辅以细节描述 She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.(多方位展现“累”)
如果大家注意这些细节的描述，一定会为你的记叙文续写增色！
本练习使用方法：
Step One 检索赢在微点相关页码的读后续写小练，练习+背诵
Step Two 做本张练习
Step Three 核对答案，背诵模仿
Part One 情绪描写
“感到害怕”的细节描述（赢在微点P53）
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。
At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared. （fəˈrəʊʃəs/ 凶猛的，残暴的）
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
2）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)
3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
表感到兴奋thrilled/excited（赢在微点P70）
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。
When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳) thump（心脏）怦怦跳
3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)
感到悲伤”的细节描述（赢在微点P33）
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。(一.....就..... upon)
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
备注：独立主格结构的使用
2） Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
3） Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
“感到开心”的细节描述（赢在微点P10）
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
（beam v. 喜笑颜开，面露喜色)
3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
"感到羞愧"的细节描述（赢在微点P80）
她感到非常羞愧。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。She felt ashamed.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)
2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)
3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)
“感到生气”的细节描述（赢在微点P23）
Sheldon感到非常生气。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。She felt very angry.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2) Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
3) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
“感到绝望”的细节描述
Tony感到很绝望。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。Tony felt hopeless/desperate.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. (感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3) Tony's beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.
“感到紧张”的细节描述（赢在微点P43）
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 I felt nervous
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1) I could feel my palms were sweating and my legs were trembling.
2) I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, wondering what to do next. She then laughed to hide her nervousness.
3) My heart beat wildly and my legs trembled, with butterflies in my stomach(心里七上八下)， I breathed.
4) I could feel my heart in my mouth(我感到我的心跳到嗓子眼了) when I stood there.
5) When I was waiting for my turn, tension came flooding over me.
6) He stood there with his legs trembling and his mind blank.
“感到惊讶”的细节描述（赢在微点P61）
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。I felt surprised.
2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1. I froze with shock, as if rooted to the ground.
2. To my surprise / shock / amazement / astonishment, they all nodded in agreement.