高考必背 读后续写之环境描写
环境描写是读后续写不可或缺的一个环节，社会环境可根据续写内容描述社区、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物或民俗民风等；自然环境可描述续写内容相关的景物，如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖泊等。环境描写需要综合运用叙述、描写、抒情等表达方法的集中表现。
1.描写自然环境的方法
自然环境描写时要做到有声有色、有味道、有质感、有动态、有画面感。可以借助描写天气、描写自然景物、描写自然环境来衬托故事中人物的心境或情绪。
2.环境描写的技巧
(1)选择与主题和情节设置一致的环境要素,以营造故事发生的特定环境。
(2)细致深入。为了从侧面衬托人物的心境或情绪,所选的景物应进行细致深入的描写。
(3)添加附加信息。如天气的变化、周边的景物、昏暗的路灯、摇曳的树影等。
(4)环境细节描写一定要与动作和心理活动等相结合,这样才能更好地发挥环境细节描写的作用。
3.充分利用环境描写对烘托故事高潮的作用
为了使故事达到最紧张、最扣人心弦的时刻,即高潮部分,常可以通过加大笔墨描写环境以达到目的。强化环境描写可以增强高潮元素,使我们感受到紧张气氛的倍增。
一、背诵经典句式
1.A cold breeze blew through my hair.一阵冷风袭过我的头发。
2.To my excitement, the water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.使我兴奋的是,海水是深蓝色的,阳光在它那清澈的玻璃表面上闪闪发光。
3.The beautiful scenery in the countryside kept me spellbound.乡村的景色使我着迷。
4.Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.然后我抬头看了一眼,看到一对风筝,长蓝尾巴,在天空中飞翔。
5.Like a lamp, the moon shone from above. The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯闪闪发光,闪烁的星星好奇地眨着眼睛。
6.There was not a single sound at night. Only the glowworms were still awake, carefully weaving a picture in the night sky. 夜里一点声音都没有,只有萤火虫还醒着,小心翼翼地在夜空里织着一幅画。
7.The sky was cloudless and the moon full. The land was robbed of its colour.天上没有一丝云彩,一轮满月挂在天空。大地失去了色彩。
8.The rain grew stronger and the sea rougher as the night progressed. 夜渐渐深了,雨下得更大,大海也更加汹涌。
9.All nature was blanketed in white. 整个大自然都笼罩在白色之中。
10.The snow was hard,and no new snow fell. The temperature dropped to 45℃ below zero. 积雪坚硬,没有新雪落下。温度降至零下45摄氏度。
11.A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.不远处有一条小溪,在绿色的两岸之间奔流不息,波光粼粼。
12.Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下,享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发。
13.Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出闪闪发亮的光线,留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
二、即学即练 根据要求完成句子，环境描写让表达更出彩
1.汤姆躺在温暖的阳光中,阳光在他的脸上投射出温暖的金色光芒。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
Tom lay in the warm sunshine, on his face.
2.大雨猛烈地敲打着屋顶,冲击着玻璃,奏出激动人心的乐章。(动词-ing形式作结果状语)
The heavy rain pounded on the roof and hit the glass, .
3.细细的雪从空中落下,在阳光下闪着光。(动词-ing形式作伴随状语)
Fine snow was falling from the sky, .
4.雪像皇冠一样笼罩在喜马拉雅山上,这景色美得无法形容。(whose引导非限制性定语从句)
The snow was crowning the Himalayas, .
5.炽热的天空中没有一片云,天热得让人无法思考,没有知觉。(too...to...)
There were no clouds in the burning sky, and .
6.当我们向前行驶时,溅起的水珠轻轻地落在车窗上。天空覆盖着一层灰色, 我几乎看不出天空和云的区别。(so that引导结果状语从句)
Splashing water droplets softly hit the car windows as we drove onwards. The sky was overhung with a blanket of grey .
三、参考答案
1.which cast a warm golden glow
2.playing the exciting music
3.twinkling in the sunlight
4.whose beauty was beyond description
5.it was too hot to think or to feel
6.so that I could barely tell the difference between the sky and clouds