高考必背 读后续写之心理活动描写
心理活动描写对读后续写有着举足轻重的作用，是塑造人物形象、刻画人物性格品质的一种方法，最常用的是描写人物的内心独白、人物的所思所想、人物的心声，欢乐或悲伤、矛盾或愁郁、忧虑或希望。心理描写能够直接深入人物心灵、揭示人物的内心世界, 同时也能够突出文章的中心或表明人物的品质或情感。心理活动描写要遵循以下三个原则:
(1)加上修饰语,落实“细微处”。描写人物心理活动时,一定要突出细节,所有的感情都体现在“细微处”,尽量不用过于笼统的词,而用相关的细节性单词或短语,例如smiled happily、shining smile on her face等。
(2)体现多样性,避免描写单一化。在进行人物心理描写时,尽量避免平铺直叙的表达,可以采用多种句式、非谓语动词等形式来体现语法结构的多样性。
(3)适当使用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法,让表达生动而优美。
一、背诵经典句式
1.I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。
2.Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
3.She was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。
4.She stood silently,(with)tears rolling/streaming down her cheeks.她静静地站着,眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
5.Her hands were shaking,with her eyes filled with tears.她的手在颤抖,眼里满含着泪水。
6.Meg was annoyed with me because I forgot to buy bread on my way home.梅格生我的气,因为我回家时忘了买面包。
7.Stacy got so frustrated that she stood up and walked out of the room.斯泰西非常沮丧,她站起来走出了房间。
8.She tried to hide her nervousness,but it was clear she wasn't comfortable when making the speech.她试图掩饰自己的紧张,但是她发表讲话时明显不自在。
9.Everyone waited tensely for the winner's name to be announced.每个人都紧张地等待着宣布胜出者的名字。
10.He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
11.Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢向她袭来。
12.She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
13.Tears blurred her eyes/vision.泪水模糊了她的双眼/视线。
14.Our mouths dropped open in surprise. 我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
二、即学即练, 模仿例句完成下列句子
1.当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕。
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared.
①At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that (嗓子发紧) and (膝盖发软).
②At the sight of the fierce wolf, I (吓呆了), too scared (不敢动弹).
③At the sight of the fierce wolf, I (被深深地恐惧感所控制) and my palms were sweating.
2.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
①When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes (激动得两眼放光).
②When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart (激动得怦怦跳).
③When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement (兴奋地不能自已).
3.一听到那个坏消息,她悲伤不已。
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
①Upon hearing the bad news, (她很心痛), tears streaming down her cheeks.
②Upon hearing the bad news, she (感到被…控制)a burst of sadness and (忍不住痛哭).
4.当妈妈亲吻他时,小宝宝开心极了。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
①When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby (非常开心).
②When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile (照亮房间).
5.她感到非常羞愧。
She felt ashamed.
①She felt so ashamed that she could (感到脸上滚烫).
②So ashamed was she that she could (感到血液涌上脸颊).
③So ashamed did she feel that she (快哭了).
6.他感到非常生气。
He felt very angry.
①He felt so angry that he (冲出房间), slamming the door violently behind him.
② ( 怒火中烧), he shook his fist at me.
7.Tony感到很绝望。
Tony felt hopeless/desperate.
①As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly (陷入黑暗之中) and (陷入绝望).
②Tony (感到被遗忘) and was getting desperate (孤独地).
三、参考答案：
1.①my throat tightened;my knees felt weak②froze with terror;to move an inch③was seized with a strong sense of horror
2.①twinkled with excitement②was thumping with excitement③took hold of her
3.①she was heartbroken②felt seized with;couldn't help crying bitterly
4.①were on top of the world②lit up the room
5.① feel her face burning②feel the blood rush up to her face③was close to tears
6.①stormed out of the room②Boiling with rage
7.①thrown into a world of darkness; sank into hopelessness②felt left out;with loneliness