【收藏备用】高考英语读后续写环境描写六大场景仿写及实战(2篇)
原卷版读后续写恰当嵌人自然环境、社会环境描写，可以渲染气氛, 烘托人物心情，暗示或推动故事情节发展，揭示主题，深化文章主旨。
环境描写六大场景
场景一
名词:
cloud 云；rain 雨；shower 阵雨；storm 暴风雨；fog雾；mist 薄雾；smog 烟雾；wind 风；breeze 微风；typhoon 台风；hurricane 颶风；tornado龙卷风；frost 霜；thunder and lightning 雷电；snowstorm暴风雪
形容词
cloudy多云的；stormy暴风雨的；foggy有雾的；misty有雾的；windy 多风的；snowy下雪的；frosty 严寒的,霜冻的；freezing 极冷的；icy 冰冷的；damp 潮湿的；wet 潮湿的,有雨的；clear 晴朗的；mild 温和的,和煦的；changeable多变的；calm 平静的；pleasant 令人愉悦的；feathery鹅毛般的；tiny极小的；awful可怕的,极坏的语块
heavy rain大雨；
continuous rain连编不断的雨；
unbearably hot 难以忍受的热；
a cold dark night 寒冷的黑夜；
clear up 放睛；
the thundering clouds 电闪雷鸣的云；
be buried in snow 深埋雪中；
cool and refreshing breeze 凉爽清新的风；open sky露天；
rain cats and dogs 下着倾盆大雨
【经典句子背诵】
1. Dark clouds were gathering in the sky天空乌云密布。
2. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.我们搬家那天,雨下得很大。
3. The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm.风在屋外呼啸。我们正在经历一场可怕的雷雨。
4. The pure feathery snowflakes were dancing gracefully in the air, making a beautiful picture.纯白的鹅毛大雪漫天飞舞,像一幅美丽的画。
5. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind, it began to rain cats and dogs.风猛烈地刮,树在大风中摇晃,而后大雨倾盆。
【经典句子仿写】
1. We had no choice but to sleep under the open sky. ( sleep, sky) 我们别无选择,只能睡在露天下。
2. Black clouds spread across the sky quickly. ( cloud, spread)乌云很快遮住了天空。
3. A cool breeze blew through the quiet park. ( breeze, blow)凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house. ( pour, beat)大雨倾盆而下,溪水上涨,风急吹,拍打着房子。
5. On a snowy day, the winds grew stronger and the snow turned into a snowstorm. ( snowy, turn)某天下雪,风越吹越大,把飘雪变成了一场暴风雪。
场景二
季节
spring春；summer夏；autumn/fall秋；winter冬
瞬间
sunlight阳光；darkness黑暗:sunrise日出；黎明:sunset日没；日落；晚霞
语块
in the breeze 在微风中；
on the summer day 在类热的夏天；
in a cold winter 在寒冷的冬天
【经典句子背诵】
1. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.第一缕阳光柔软得让人不忍触摸。
2. From the distance, he saw some dim light in the village.从远处,他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。
3. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.伴随着一缕阳光,整个世界鲜花绽放。
4. Bars of sunlight slanted down through the tall narrow windows.一缕缕阳光从高而狭窄的窗户中照射进来。
5. The sun was so bright that it even shone through the haze over the small town.阳光是那么明亮,甚至穿透了小镇上空的阴霾。
【经典句子仿写】
1. The sweetness of the sun fills my heart. ( sun, fill)我的心里满是阳光的甜蜜。
2. Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds would sing happily in the park. ( spring, sing)春天一到,美丽的鸟儿就会在公园里欢快地歌唱。
3. As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, he quickened his steps. (darken, dim)天空越来越黑,光线越来越暗,他加快了步伐。
4. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness. ( hide, thick)日落西山,浓浓的夜色中很难看清任何东西。
5. It was near midnight in an extremely cold winter, and the temperature was minus 9 degrees everywhere. ( midnight, minus)那是一个非常寒冷的冬天,快到午夜的时候,气温到处都是零下9摄氏度。
场景三 日月星辰
名词
sun 太阳；sunshine 阳光；sunrise日出；sunset日落；star星星:moon月亮；moonlight月光
形容词
sunny 阳光充足的,和煦的:starry 布满星星的,星光闪耀的
语块
in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里；
the rising sun冉冉升起的太阳；
the setting sun 落日；
under the burning sun of mid-summer 在盛夏灼热的阳光里；
deep blue sky湛蓝的天空；
shining/glowing stars 闪亮的星；
a cloudless/clear sky 晴空
【经典句子背诵】
1. Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
2. Bathed in the golden sunlight, the sea rippled and sparkled charmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。
3. The moon watched from the sky behind the clouds as the stars blink their eyes in fatigue.月藏在云后偷看,星星带着倦意眨了眨眼睛。
4. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin我沐浴在阳光下好像亲吻着每寸肌肤。
5. The night began to fall and the stars appeared in the sky, twinkling their eyes at us with sympathy.夜幕降临,天上星星一闪一闪,同情地向我们眨着眼睛。
【经典句子仿写】
1. The sky was dotted with sparkling stars. (dot, sparkling)天空点缀着繁星。
2.The sunshine cast beautiful shadows among the leaves. (sunshine, shadow)阳光在树叶间投下美丽的影子。
3. The mountain villages were bathed in the quiet moonlight. (bathe, moonlight)山村沐浴在静谧的月色中。
4. The sunset painted the sky in hues of orange and pink, a perfect ending to a perfect day. (sunset, paint)夕阳将天空染成橙粉色，为完美的一天画上句号。
5. The sun filtered through the clouds, signaling the end of the rain. (filter, signal)阳光穿过云层，预示着雨的结束。
四 山河湖海
名词
mountain山；hill 小山,丘陵；peak 山峰；valley峡谷；hollow山谷；rock 岩石； river 江河； lake湖；sea 大海；ocean 海洋；bay海湾；beach 海滩；shore 海岸；coast 海岸,海滨；stream 溪流；wave波,海浪；reef 暗礁
语块
snow-capped mountains雪山
grand /wide/deep valley大/宽/深快谷landscape of lakes and hills 湖光山色beautiful mountains and clear waters 山清水秀；
shallow/deep stream浅的/深的溪流；
the bank of the lake 湖畔；
mountain range 山脉；
inviting views 迷人的景色
【经典句子背诵】
1. The river makes bends or menders through low valleys to the plain where rice grows.河流蜿蜒地流过低谷,流向生长稻谷的平原。
2. The roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.海浪的咆哮和海鸟的呜叫奏起了海岸的音乐。
3. Suddenly , there was a loud sound, the earth was not splitting but the sea was roaring.突然,一声巨响,不是大地开裂,而是大海咆哮。
4. The surface of the sea was gilded with a layer of silvery light. 海面上镀上了一层银色的光。
5. The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its surface, making it look like a giant mirror.海水深蓝，阳光在其表面闪烁，使它看起来像一面巨大的镜子。
【经典句子仿写】
1. The mountain is covered entirely in dense jungle. (cover, jungle)这座山完全掩盖在茂密的丛林中。
2.The waves were rising higher and higher. (wave, rise)海浪翻滚得越来越高。
3. A clear little stream ran merrily along its narrow way. (stream, merry)清澈的小溪沿着狭窄的溪道欢快地流淌着。
4. On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and winds were howling. (stormy, howl)那个暴风雨的黑夜里,海浪肆意拍打,狂风咆哮不止。
5. We found ourselves in a fairyland: warm breeze, deep valleys, high mountains and green grass. (find, breeze)我们发现自己身处仙境之中:暖风、深谷、高山和青草。
五 花鸟虫鱼
名词
flower花；bird鸟；fish鱼；dog狗；cat猫；monkey猴子
语块
fragrant flowers 芬芳的花朵
the perfume of flowers 花朵的清香
green grass 绿草地
the song of binds 鸟鸣
【经典句子背诵】
1.The egret spread its wings like a white cloud, dancing in the misty spring rain.白鹭舒展双翅如白云，在朦胧春雨中翩跹起舞。
2. Fireflies dotted the summer night, turning the meadow into a field of floating stars.萤火虫点缀夏夜，将草地化作一片流动的星海。
3. Sunflower seeds flew in the wind, carried to faraway fields to grow.葵花籽随风飘散，飞向远方的田野生长。
4. A warm and sunny afternoon on a holiday, birds were singing and flowers were waving in the breeze.一个阳光明媚的假日,温暖的午后,鸟儿在歌唱,花儿在微风中摇曳。
5. A few hours into the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, so he grabbed his bat before realizing it was just a stray dog.长途跋涉几个小时后，他看到了远处的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意识到那只是一只流浪狗。
【经典句子仿写】
1. Birds greet the new day with their morning song. (greet, bird)聆听鸟儿用晨歌迎接崭新的一天。
2. They heard the chatter of birds among the bushes. (chatter, bush)他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声。
3. The crickets were playing the violin deep in the grass. (cricket, violin)蟋蟀在草丛深处拉着小提琴。
4. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. (lovely, vine)那是一个美好的春日,玫瑰藤在变绿。
5. With the wolf glaring at him fiercely outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down. (glare, edge)随着这只狼在车外恶狠狠地怒视着他，麦克快要崩溃。
六 森林原野
名词
forest 森林:jungle 从林:plain平原;grassland草原;treetop树梢
形容词
dark 黑压压的;silent 寂静的
语块
the thick forest 茂密的森林;
out of one's reach 够不到
【经典句子背诵】
1. In the distance is a stretch of grassland.远处是连绵一片的草原。
2.The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness.如华盖般的树枝遮天蔽日,把小路笼罩在黑暗中。
3. The leaves glowed in the early morning light like hundreds of tiny hands.枝叶在晨光下闪闪发光,犹如几百只纤细的小手。
4. The wide plain , with thousands of animals on the move, was an awesome spectacle.成千上万只动物在辽阔的平原上跑动,真是令人赞叹的奇观。
5. The forest seemed to sigh as the wind passed through the trees, carrying whispers of the past.风穿过树林时，森林仿佛发出叹息，携带着往昔的低语。
【经典句子仿写】
1. Immediately an absolute darkness ruled the forest. (darkness, rule)顷刻间,黑暗笼罩了森林。
2.The grassland smelt fresh and sweet after rain. (grassland, smell)雨后的草原闻起来清新香甜。
3. The lake is situated at the eastern of the mountain range. (situate, range)湖泊位于山脉的东部。
4. The thick forest stretched as far as the eye could see. (thick, stretch)茂密的森林一望无际。
5. The tree stood out from the rest of the landscape, bathed in a bright angelic light. (landscape, bathe)那棵树从周围的景色中脱颖而出,沐浴在天使般的清辉中。
读后续写环境描写六大场景精练篇
一、短语训练。
运用适当短语,并用其正确形式填空,然后翻译成汉语。
1.The rain ___________ the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight
2. The sound of my footsteps ___________the gracefully waving reeds.
3. The sky ___________numerous twinkling stars.
4. The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun ___________the windows.
5. The mountain top ___________snow.
6. She ___________the sunshine and enjoyed the warmth.
【参考答案】
1.drummed on 翻译：两水拍打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别。
2. was accompanied by 翻译：我的脚步声伴随着优美摆动着的芦苇。
3. is dolled with 翻译：天空中点级着无数闪烁的星星。
4. reflected in 翻译：落日映照在窗户上,院于显得格外的美。
5. was covered with 翻译：山顶被积雪覆差。
6. was bathed in 翻译：她沐浴在阳光下,享受着温暖。
二、语境训练
按照提示要求完成下列句子。
1.洁白的鹅毛般的大雪在空中翩翩起舞。
The pure feathery snowflakes __________ in the air
2.可怕的大雨正在拍打着窗户。
The dreadful rain __________the windows.
3.蓝天、白云、鸟鸣、鲜花让我们惊呆了。The blue sky, white clouds , singing birds and fragrant flowers __________.
4.在经历了令人劳累的长途跋涉之后,我们发现自己置身于仙境之中:蜿蜒的河流、暖风、深谷和青山绿草。
After a tiring and long journey, we __________in a fairyland: winding rivers, warm breeze , deep valleys. high mountains and green grass.
5.我们惊讶地发现阳光竟然早早地透过窗帘照射了进来。
We were surprised to find that the morning sunshine __________through the curtain in such an early hour.
6. It was a still, sweet day of early summer; ____________________ (树叶似乎更绿了)
7. The skies were dark. ____________________ (一阵大风猛烈地刮着)，cutting my face like a knife, I shook with cold and fear as I walked home.
8. ____________________ (被凉风所包裹)，the dullness of the day was softened, providing a soothing atmosphere for the soul.
9. ____________________ (沐浴在阳光下) and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.
10.With ____________________ (头顶上方有沉重的乌云)，the atmosphere became heavy with anticipation of a storm.
【参考答案】
1. danced gracefully
2. was beating against
3. held us entirely in their power
4. found ourselves
5. had flooded in
6. the leaves seemed greener; the flowers seemed brighter
7. A strong wind was blowing hard
8. Wrapped in a cool breeze
9. Bathed in the sunshine
10. dark clouds looming overhead
三、根据括号内提示翻译下面的句子。
1. 连绵起伏的山丘上铺满了鲜嫩的绿草。(hills)________________________________________________________________
2. 在夏日的午后，海滩上的沙子在灼热的阳光下闪闪发光。(sunshine)________________________________________________________________
3. 他们在林中迷路了，周围是满地落叶和高耸的树木。(fallen leaves and trees)________________________________________________________________
4. 夜晚，露营者围坐在营火旁，头上是一片繁星点点的天空。(stars )________________________________________________________________
5. 大雨猛烈地敲打着屋顶，发出震耳欲聋的轰鸣声，淹没了所有其他的声音。(rain)________________________________________________________________
6. 晨雾给山谷蒙上一层薄雾，使一切显得神秘而迷人。(morning mist )________________________________________________________________
7. 外面暴风雪肆虐，家人围坐在壁炉旁，感到温暖和安全。(snowstorm)________________________________________________________________
8. 他在徒步时感到与森林覆盖的小山有着深刻的联系，每一步都让他更接近自然。(hills)________________________________________________________________
9. 在那片郁郁葱葱的森林里，鸟儿欢快地歌唱着，宛如在庆祝新的一天的到来。( forest)________________________________________________________________
10. 看着窗外飘落的雪花，她感到一种深深的孤独感，但她知道春天总会如约而至。(snowflakes)________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
1. The rolling hills were covered with lush green grass.
2. On a summer afternoon, the sand on the beach glittered under the burning sunshine.
3. They got lost in the forest, with fallen leaves and towering trees all around.
4. At night, campers sat around the fire under a sky filled with twinkling stars.
5. Heavy rain pounded against the roof, making a deafening roar that drowned out all other sounds.
6. The morning mist blanketed the valley in a layer of fog, making everything mysterious and enchanting.
7. With the raging snowstorm outside, the family gathered around the fireplace, feeling warm and safe.
8. He felt a deep connection to the forested hills as he hiked, each step bringing him closer to nature.
9. In that lush forest, the birds were singing merrily , as if they were celebrating the arrival of a new day.
10. As she watched the falling snowflakes outside the window, she felt a deep sense of loneliness, but she knew that spring would come as sure as it always does
高考读后续写真题实战应用
1. (2025·浙江1月卷)As they emerged from the station, Kevin gazed at the expansive sky, a profound sense of fulfillment washing over him.当他们走出车站时，凯文凝视着广阔的天空，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。
2. (2025·八省联考卷)The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart.灯光渐渐变暗，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。
3. (2024·新课标I卷) I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September.我在九月一个寒冷、潮湿、难忘的夜晚遇到了冈特。
4. (2021·新课标I卷) The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。
读后续写环境描写语篇精练
1．（2025·湖南·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the quiet town of Willow Creek, lived a young woman named Sarah. Sarah was an artist, known for her paintings of landscapes and animals, but beneath her calm appearance, she struggled with anxiety and depression. The pressures of her job and the isolation she often felt had a negative impact on her mental health, and she spent many days feeling overwhelmed and disconnected from the world around her.One afternoon, as Sarah was leaving the local art gallery, she noticed a small, scruffy dog sitting by the door. It looked lost, hungry, and a little scared. Sarah’s heart softened as she approached the dog, offering it a piece of her sandwich. The dog wagged its tail and sniffed at the food, but instead of eating, it sat down next to her, as if asking for something more. Feeling an instinctive (直觉的)pull, Sarah decided to take the dog home with her, naming it Sunny.Over the next few weeks, Sunny became Sarah’s constant companion. Every morning, he would greet her with an excited bark and a wagging tail. Sarah soon discovered that Sunny was not just a pet, but a therapy dog. Whenever she felt her anxiety starting to set in, Sunny would push her hand with his nose or curl up beside her, offering her the comfort of his presence. His gentle behavior and unconditional love helped Sarah feel less alone, and for the first time in months, she began to feel like she had a purpose.One evening, Sarah decided to take Sunny for a walk through the woods near a popular campsite. The sun was setting, and the air was fresh and cool. As they walked deeper into the forest, Sarah’s mind wandered to the dark thoughts she had been battling for so long. Suddenly, Sunny stopped in his tracks and started barking furiously, looking alertly at a thick patch of bushes. Sarah felt a surge of panic, wondering what had startled (惊吓)him. But before she could react, Sunny dashed toward the bushes, pulling Sarah along with him.
注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Out of nowhere, Sarah heard the sound of a girl crying in a weak voice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Seeing the girl’s relieved smile, Sarah realized Sunny not only saved a life, but inspired her to change and create. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文欣赏
Out of nowhere, Sarah heard the sound of a girl crying in a weak voice. She quickly followed Sunny, who dashed through the bushes, and found a small girl stuck in a deep hole, unable to climb out. The girl was sobbing, clearly terrified. Sarah immediately called for help, then used a nearby branch and rope to create a makeshift rescue tool. With Sunny’s support, she managed to pull the girl to safety. They sat together for a moment to calm her down before heading back to the campsite.
Seeing the girl’s relieved smile, Sarah realized Sunny not only saved a life, but inspired her to change and create. That evening, feeling contented to have extended a helping hand, she began writing about their journey, detailing how Sunny helped her overcome anxiety and find purpose. She planned to published the story, sharing how animals can heal and transform lives. Sunny had not only rescued the girl but also helped Sarah to regain passion for life and connection.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了Sarah和她的治疗犬Sunny在森林中意外救下一名被困女孩的故事，以及这次经历如何改变和激励了Sarah。
【详解】
1. 段落续写：
① 由第一段首句内容“不知从哪里传来一个女孩微弱的哭声。”可知，第一段可描写Sarah和Sunny在森林中遇到了一名需要帮助的女孩。② 由第二段首句内容“看到小女孩如释重负的笑容，Sarah意识到Sunny不仅拯救了一条生命，还激励了她去改变和创造。”可知，第二段可描写这次经历让Sarah意识到Sunny的重要性，并激励她在艺术创作中融入新的主题。
2. 续写线索：Sarah和Sunny在森林中听到女孩的哭声，发现女孩被困——Sarah呼叫救援并安慰女孩，Sunny提供支持——女孩获救后，Sarah意识到Sunny的价值，决定用艺术传播心理健康和治疗动物的重要性——Sarah的绘画作品开始反映她与Sunny的旅程，展示人与动物之间的纽带和治愈力量。
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
①发现：discover/find
②反映：reflect/mirror
③意识到：realize/be aware of
情绪类：
①害怕的：frightened/scared
②安慰：comfort/relieve
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Following Sunny through the underbrush, she found a small child, no older than six, trembling with fear.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】On arriving at the campsite, they were greeted by the anxious parents, who were thankful to see the girl was all right.(运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句)
2．（2025·河北保定·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As I’ve grown older, my connection to nature has become stronger. Recently, I was fortunate to spend a good part of a week in the wilderness, following the teachings of my father from my childhood. Ever since I was 10, my sister, father, and I would load up his canoe (独木舟) with supplies and set off into the heart of Algonquin Park.There were years when I ignored the call of Algonquin, caught up in the busyness of life —graduating from school and raising young children. It all felt incredibly demanding. But as time passed, my children grew older, and the call of Algonquin grew louder.With the support of my family, I finally listened to that call again, and started planning to take part in one of our family trips there. My family's rich experience in the outdoors has been invaluable for such trips. My sister, a teacher, carefully planned our trips while my dad, a skilled outdoorsman, effortlessly handled tasks like setting up camp and preparing meals. And my husband is really strong and good at moving things around.But, as the trip got closer, my husband suddenly hurt his leg. And suddenly, I was faced with managing the first part of the trip as the only adult. Could I drive my daughter, alone, to Algonquin's remote north boundary to meet my dad and mom? Could I steer (驾驶) the canoe? Could I carry the canoe?I had driven across Canada, alone, in my twenties, well before Google Maps. I was pretty sure I could steer if we kept to smaller lakes that were less likely to become windswept. But I feared carrying a canoe. Plus, lifting it onto my shoulders seemed impossible for someone of my strength. But Algonquin was calling me. I recalled the fearless independence of my younger self and called Dad.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms.
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范文欣赏
“If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle. Despite my initial doubts, we started our adventure, determined to meet my parents at the appointed spot. The journey was filled with challenges, but with each one we overcame, my confidence grew. Sailing the lake was less frightening than I had expected, and my daughter proved to be a capable and enthusiastic co-pilot.
When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. Their faces lit up with pride as they saw us paddle in. “You did it!” my dad cried, hugging me tightly. “We knew you could,” my mom added, her voice filled with emotion. Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire. That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me. The wilderness helped me become stronger and more independent, reminding me of the strength I carried within.
【导语】
文章以人物为线索展开，作者回忆起从小与父亲和妹妹一起在阿尔冈昆公园探险的经历，但曾因生活的忙碌而暂时忽略了这份召唤。随着时间的推移，孩子们长大，作者对阿尔冈昆的向往再次被唤醒。在家人的支持下，作者开始计划再次参与家庭旅行。然而，临近出发时，丈夫突然受伤，作者不得不独自承担起管理旅行初段的责任，包括独自驾车带女儿前往阿尔冈昆公园，以及面对驾驶和搬运独木舟的挑战。尽管作者对独自驾车有信心，但对搬运独木舟感到担忧。但最终，作者对自然的渴望战胜了恐惧，她回想起了年轻时无畏的独立精神，并决定迎接挑战，联系父亲继续前行。
【详解】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容““如果我们缩短路线，找一艘轻便的独木舟，那我们就去，”我告诉他。”可知，第一段可描写作者克服困难，驾驶独木舟与父母会合的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“当我们终于抵达时，我的父母张开双臂迎接我们。”可知，第二段可描写作者的父母为作者感到自豪，一家人分享旅途中的故事以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：选择路线，踏上冒险之旅——克服困难，顺利会合——父母夸赞——分享旅途故事——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①选择：chose/pick out
②决定做某事：determine to do sth/decide to do sth
③充满：be filled with/be full of
④拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①令人害怕的： frightening/dreadful
②充满热情的：enthusiastic/passionate
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle.（运用了that引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]
That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me.（运用了that引导宾语从句）[高分句型3]
Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire.（运用了现在分词短语做状语）