素材积累:描写童年趣事的精彩开头和结尾
环境描写，是续写重要的描写手段之一，可以起到融情于景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以使文章读起来生动有趣、真实感人。
环境描写大招二
《与你到永久》，伍佰：
歌词：风儿轻轻地吹，雨也绵绵下个不停
The wind blows gently, and the rain keeps falling.
→A gentle wind breezing, a fine drizzle was falling steadily like my missing for you.
大招二：写景+比喻+特点：
句式：写景句（本体），+ like + 喻体 + that从句/非谓语动词
v招式体验：
1. The stars are in the sky.
改写：
The bright stars scatter in the sky, like gems twinkling brilliantly.
璀璨的星星散落在天空中，像宝石一样闪闪发光。
2. The trees are waving.
改写：
The trees wave wildly in the air, like drunken men trembling from side to side.
树在空中疯狂地摆动着，像醉汉一样摇摇晃晃。
3. The stars sparkled.
改写：
The stars sparkled vividly, like a curious child glazing at us.
The stars sparkled vividly, like a curious child that glazed at us.
The stars sparkled vividly, like naughty children looking at us with curiosity.
星星闪闪发光，就像顽皮的孩子好奇地看着我们。
4. A fire still fluttered in the grate, like a bird trying to find its way out of the room.
一团火还在壁炉炉膛里舞动着，就像一只努力挣脱束缚的飞鸟。
5. The last leaf of autumn fluttered to the ground, like a drop of autumn’s tear, melting silently in his overwhelming sorrow.
秋天的最后一片叶子像一滴秋天的眼泪一样飘落在地上，在巨大的悲伤中默默融化。
v表达示例：
1. wind：
The icy wind started howling, like a sharp knife scratching my face.
2. sun:
The morning sunlight flooded in through the curtain, like pieces of gold dancing on the floor.
3. tree:
Tall trees lined up on both sides of the street, like soldiers throwing long shadows on the ground.
4. cloud:
The white clouds hang low in the sky, like pieces of cotton sailing with the wind.
5. rain:
The dreadful rain was pouring down, like monsters beating wildly against the windows.
6. flower:
The flowers dotted the garden, like spirits dancing gracefully in the air.